24 Sep Here is comment：Grammar/Spelling: It is fine tha
Here is comment：Grammar/Spelling: It is fine that you wrote completely in first person ‘I’. However, it seems that you have overused the ‘I’. See if you can say the same thing without saying I this and I that over and over again. General Content: I like the general content of your bio and statement.Many sentences are a bit confusing to understand although I ‘think’ I get your intentions.